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Makoto's finger pressed the doorbell to Haruka's house, then glanced up to the second story window. [Name] crossed her arms over her chest and huffed loudly before shifting her weight from her left foot to her right foot. School has pretty much already started and Haruka still hasn't gotten out of bed yet? The lazy little...

"He's probably still in the bath."

The brunette said, stepping up to the front door and sliding it open without a single care in the world that it could be considered trespassing. Protesting loudly, [Name] gripped onto Makoto's uniformed arm and attempted to pull him back - though, due to the excessive amount of muscle, she was unable to hold him still.

Taking of his shoes at the door, Makoto trotted up the stairs to the bathroom with [Name] following hurriedly behind. Before she got to the top of the stairs, she heard the slight murmur of Haruka's voice and the swishing about of water inside the tub; when she stepped through the door she saw water dripping down Haruka's toned, naked chest - then down his abdomen and farther, farther --

She didn't know why she was getting so excited and hot right at that moment, but the need to air out from her collar arose when the dark-haired 17 year old stood up farther. He wasn't...naked, was he...? Of course, even if he was, she wouldn't mind. Subconsciously, her tongue drew over her lips while her shoulder leaned up against the door-frame with her arms still crossed.





He was wearing his swimsuit. In the tub; just when she thought she was going to see something good, too! [Name] cried out in pain as she turned into the doorjamb to slam her forehead into it; the two boys watched her in bewilderment, Haruka only half-way out of the tub while clutching onto Makoto's hand.

"[Name]? Are you...okay?"

Makoto's gentle voice asked her. Sobbing quietly to herself, [Name] nodded her head in response and muttered something under her breath as she straightened herself out after a few seconds of mental breakdown time.

"Y-yeah, I'm okay; but, actually...can I have some alone time with my boyfriend, Mako-chan?"

Snapping almost instantaneously out of her bout of depression and sexual frustration with a large grin raising her lips; she strode across the room to take Makoto by the arm and drag him out of the bathroom, shutting the door behind her before the brunette had any time to protest.

"B-but, [Name]! W-we have to go to scho--"

Haruka's gaze was on her; curious as to her intentions, he sat down on the edge of the bathtub with his eyes holding apathy and his dark hair sticking to his forehead. With his muscled body still dripping with water, [Name] parted his legs and stood in between. Taking his face in her hands she leaned in closer to his ear and whispered:

"How many times have I told you to stop wearing that in the bath? I thought I was going to see something good just a second ago. Are you teasing me, Haru?"

He shrugs; his fingers playing with the edge of [Name]'s uniform skirt.


It was rare that he ever played coy with her - it wasn't in his personality to - but, when he did, he was damn good at making her want it bad.

Forgetting that they were running late for school and that Makoto was just outside the door, the lovely couple decided that just then would be the optimal time to take another bath - though, this time without Haruka's swimsuit.
|| reader x Haruka Nanase ||
[ Free!/ Swimming Anime ]

so ooc ;___;
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tippycat332 Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
That was my first reaction when I watched the anime xD oh goddamn how much I hoped to see something GOOD!!
SoulEvans12 Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I felt the same way watching it i was like "YES, YES, BRING IT ON, SHOW MOMMA WHAT SHE WAS WAITING FO-GOD DAMMIT!"
also, Haru you sexy beast, you. 
Erindevlin4u Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That was sexy <3
Are you xxHikaRukoxx on watt pad? 
SugoiKawaii-desu Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No I'm not; I don't have watt pad account.

Whoever this xxHikaRukoxx is has stolen my work. The only accounts I have are from Quizilla,, and here.

Please link me to their profile, if you would be ever so kind (:
Sorry didn't see this til now but Ruko has deleted the story I think
SugoiKawaii-desu Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I found her and asked her multiple times to take down all of the work she stole from other people.

So, i have exacted my justice, yes. Thank you for tipping me off, even if that wasn't your intention in the first place XD
MomijiSohmaumbreon Jan 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Please make a lemon sequel to this. I have no shame in requesting that,

AWWWE mokoto don't worry I would take you to school xD 
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