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It was almost impossible to convey to the 17 year old boy her feelings towards him without him misunderstanding. The phrase she finally got the courage to mutter to him, 'I like you', had took on a different meaning in his own mind - meaning only a sort of 'like' as a friend. 'You're a good friend', 'I'm glad we're friends', or 'I'm happy you're my friend' were probably accurate synonyms for Makoto's definition of 'I like you'.

The first time she confessed, he just smiled at her and pat her [h/c] hair. He accepted her feelings of friendship with a big heart and a ruffling of her hair. [Name] thought he felt the same and reached for his hand to lace her fingers with hers; Makoto glanced down at her, brows drawn in confusion as she grasped his hand.

"[Name]? What are you doing?"

"You...said you liked me, too...so, I thought that..."

"I do like you. You're a really good friend!"

There was a heartbreaking warmth in his tone that made [Name] cringe her hand away. Friend. That's all she was to him? Just a friend? Her heart weighed down heavy as lead in her chest and her hands fled into her blazer pockets. Makoto's earnest, green eyes flickered to her face and watched her expression melt into that of hurt. He placed a large and gentle hand on her shoulder, but she shrugged it off before he could touch her.

"I-I'm sorry...Tachibana."

"Tachibana...? Why are you using my last name all the sudden?"

She didn't reply to him, merely smiled and turned her back to him, then walked away without so much as saying a 'good-bye' or a 'see you later!' like she always did. Why? Why did it leave him feeling so...empty? He felt her name rise in his throat and right on the tip of his tongue, his hands twitching to reach out and take her by the arm - but, he let her go.
|| reader x Makoto Tachibana ||
[ Free!/ Swimming Anime ]

part one of two :heart:
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:iconamberdango:
ohhhh!!! Friendzoned!!!!
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:icontwerkingdino:
ALL OF YOUR FICS ARE TH EBEST PLEASE MARRY ME
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SugoiKawaii-desu Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

I--

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:icontwerkingdino:
SORRY NO CHOICES WERE MARRIED NOW
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:iconsugoikawaii-desu:
SugoiKawaii-desu Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
where's my ring fool

i aint see no ring on my finger

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:icontwerkingdino:
It's on google images niqqa
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SugoiKawaii-desu Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
no u
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:iconyay-you:
MAKOTO YOU LITTLE PIECE OF SH-
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zendeya67 Nov 29, 2013  Student Writer
Why Makoto? I would just smile sadly then walk away from him then say "Tachibana... I just...." *RUNS AWAY AS FAST AS I CAN WHILES CRYING* ;w;
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FuckYourFaith Nov 27, 2013  Student Artist
WHY! :iconcraiplz:
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